And they were small ones that should have been picked up, such as spelling. I don’t know if they transfer to the paperback version, but the e-book version there were a lot. One big flaw with the story that stuck out the most to me was the grammatical errors and there is quite a bit. What would have helped the book if November continued to get letters throughout the book rather then just at the beginning and then just at the end. Reynolds sped through the main story line and it was almost forgotten until the end of the book. While Reynolds sort of defended Asher’s side with the ‘Mayson curse’ but for November, it would have made more sense for her to be more standoffish considering what she grew up with.

It also didn’t make sense that they would just fall in love so quickly with one another without really knowing each other. She spent to much at having moments between Asher and November that it got a little redundant. She has had a rough childhood, believing htat she wasn’t beautiful and not worthy and Asher breaks down those walls and makes her feel those things for the first time in her life.įor the story, the idea was there, but Reynolds didn’t develop it enough. Her happy ever after gets challenged as ghosts from her past follow her and threaten everything that she’s building.Īsher knows that she is the girl for him and he is determined to do anything in his power to make her see that. She quickly meets Asher and they hit it off immediately. The book follows November as she moves down to Tennessee to move in with her father after she gets attacked in New York.

Until november by aurora rose reynolds